HARDY FORUM ARCHIVE HO2039 6/15/02 " HARDY ON GENTLEMEN CONTINUED" ================================================================== Date: Sat, 15 Jun 2002 15:55:21 -0700 From: Betty Cortus Subject: More "Gentlemen" To add, belatedly, to last month's discussion about the usage of the term "gentleman", the following passage from _A Pair of Blue Eyes_ was cited by a contributor to the VICTORIA list where a similar thread has been in progess for some time. This occurs in Chapter XIV, where Elfride reveals her pleasure at being noticed by "several ladies and gentlemen" when visiting London: 'My dear, you mustn't say "gentlemen" nowadays,' her stepmother answered in the tones of arch concern that so well became her ugliness. 'We have handed over "gentlemen" to the lower middle class, where the word is still to be heard at tradesmen's balls and provincial tea-parties, I believe. It is done with here.' 'What must I say, then?'[Elfride enquires] ' "Ladies and men" always' [Mrs. S. replies] I wonder if Mrs. Swancourt's exaggerated fastidiousness about the word's recent pejoration or democratization is Hardy's sly jab at Emma's family and its pretensions to gentility. Betty Cortus hardycor@owl.csusm.edu ========== Date: Sun, 16 Jun 2002 07:25:19 -0400 From: Rosemarie Morgan Subject: Re: More "Gentlemen" Betty-- coincidentally I've just finished a piece for publication with Palgrave in which I touched, very briefly, on Mrs Swancourt's characterisation, segments/aspects of which appear to derive from Hardy's first (unpublished ) novel, *The Poor Man and the Lady.* This doesn't mean to say that the socially-divisive Giffords didn't somehow infiltrate TH's characterisation of Elfride's unlovable stepmother (Mrs Swancourt) -- who knows? several contemporaries lent themselves, unwittingly, to the composition process. The rather grim picture of Mrs Swancourt's vulgar antagonism to neighbours, peers and community appears, however, to derive, in part, from Hardy's first novel. Rather than go over the same ground I'm appending a small (truncated) piece of my Palgrave article, here: Horace Moule...called Hardy’s attention to certain “slips of taste” in the original version of A Pair of Blue Eyes. These were referred to as “Tinsleyan” slips by this elite Oxford scholar and pointed to items of etiquette such as the placement of “Lord” in Luxellian’s nomenclature as also, no doubt, to the account of the Lords and Ladies in their resplendent carriages on Rotten Row which, filtered through Mrs Swancourt’s consciousness, rather crudely insinuates that such a show is nothing less than a display of ostentatious vulgarity. Predictably, the class-driven Hardy was quick to revise these “slips of taste” .... He incorporated these changes into the three-volume edition that followed serialisation ... The Rotten Row scene, which Hardy seems to have lifted from The Poor Man and the Lady, was not actually modified until 1895 despite the fact that it had been one of the scenes criticised, earlier, by Macmillan (in his reading of *The Poor Man*) as full of "exaggeration and excess." _____ I suppose we can gauge the falsity of Mrs Swancourt's utterances by the first sentence you quote (given that beauty is truth and truth is beauty). Cheers, Rosemarie ________________________ about the usage of the term >"gentleman" > >'My dear, you mustn't say "gentlemen" nowadays,' her stepmother answered in >the tones of arch concern that so well became her ugliness. ' ==========